Thursday, July 5, 2012

Critique of Esraa's Work

Photo #1 - Sad Girl -  While there isn't a whole lot going on in the background, I still really enjoyed this image.  The little girl's expression is just great.  I like how the text is stating the obvious.  The photo itself follows the rule of thirds.  I almost feel like this image wants to be cropped, because of the small amount of information in the background.  All in all, I would say that she did what she was trying to do with this photo.

Photo #2 - Girl Reading - This photo has lots of information in the background.  The girl is center framed but it feels like she is leaning to the right.  I really like the reflections in the windows.  Through the reflection you can tell that the image is well exposed.  I feel like the book may have been the subject in this photo, which is good because that was the project.  There are lots of rectangles in this photo, along with a few triangles.

Photo #3 - Girl Playing - The color in this photo is very vivid, lots of red and yellow.  I like how the colors take you through the photo, red foreground, yellow mid-ground and green in the background.  I also like how the border of the playground seems to connect to the floor of the playhouse behind her.  The photo is well exposed.  I feel like the girl is right in the middle of the picture and the photo is heavily weighted to the left.  Maybe a different angle would have been better.  I really like the text that she edited in her photos, they are very funny.

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